Draft- Student Exchange

At first our film had several things we had to change. We found this out by getting feedback from the class, and there were some suggestions. These suggestions were to change the font from the graffiti font to the same as our other fonts. This was because it was difficult to read once the film was put onto the big screen. This was the same for our title font as it did not fit in with our film style and came across as plain. Once we looked back at our film we discovered that the corrections that we had made,due to the feedback, were the right choices and it enabled us to advance our film even more.

We finally made some quick changes to our film, this therefore meant that we had two small drafts before the final. After completing the changes to the first draft we wanted to make a small adjustments to our film.The first one was to increase the volume of dietetic speech in the hallway when the bullies are hitting Peter. This is  because the corridor particularly echoed  at this point. We also changed the last scene. This was because the hand held camera effect moved too much. It made the scene look out of place and unsteady. So we cut the last scene out in the middle and had it ending on the bullies staring as Peter.